Sometimes life seems so loud and rushed.

I long for that peacefulness
The kids are in bed
I long for that quiet
To lay down my head
The phone is ringing
I just let it go
The t.v. is blaring
I just watch it snow
I run from one thing to another to another to another
I just need that quiet to be a good mother
Everyone needs some time for themself
Everyone needs quiet to rediscover themself.

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  • Sotiris on Nov 19, 2008

    I liked that :) . Imagine snowing outside and sitting next to the fireplace. Everything is so quite and the only light comes from the fireplace. Outside is snowing slowly. You poem reminded me that atmosphere.

    Thanks for sharing

  • joystick7 on Nov 19, 2008

    Nice!

  • Michael Degenhardt on Nov 19, 2008

    My wife and I have 4 kids ranging from 9 to 15 so I can certainly understand this one. Love the flow and find that time and peace for fyourself. Michael

  • Will Gray on Nov 19, 2008

    Nice write. This is so true. We all need time for ourselves.

  • Melody SJAL on Nov 19, 2008

    Sooo true. Nice work. Thanks for bookmarking my poem, Paula.

  • lindalulu on Nov 19, 2008

    Very true, you want peace and quiet and I yearn for a full house again, how ironic!

  • Joie Schmidt on Nov 20, 2008

    Peaceful, quiet time is important for everyone.

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • ManofGod14 on Nov 24, 2008

    This is a very beautiful expression! Peace, a commodity that we all seek in times of chaos; whatever the degree of chaos.

  • Supz on Nov 26, 2008

    Hey Paula,

    This is a good poem. I can\’t relate to it myself as I don\’t have kids but as a writer myself I really like it.

    Maybe if you have time you can check some of my stuff out.

    Regards

    Supz

  • Dendro Azures on Dec 1, 2008

    A little quiet time can make all the difference.

    Loved the poem!

    –Dendro

  • Bibi on Jan 11, 2009

    Beautiful! I remember that feeling… but, now, as an empty nester sometimes I long for all the noise and bustle! Even so, it seems I always do my best creative work when I alone with time for myself.

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