My first attempt at poetry.

Rain falling hard on my shoulders
Hitting my skin
Refreshing my world
Splashing the ground
i dance, i sing, my arms outstretched
the feel of the cold water against me
the most wonderful feeling in the world

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  • Sky Lumina on Jun 14, 2009

    fits my mood and amplifies it :) well done!

  • Adrie mesapati on Feb 20, 2011

    Rain is beautiful….nice post :-D

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