The Rain

Lilliana F on Apr 27, 2011

Poem.

Slowly softly raindrops fall

Upon this spring day

At first a sprinkle

A mist

‘Spitting’

Then the shower

Then the downpour

The downpour is the

Best of all

For it blurs and mars

The world outside

The modern evils

The 21st century disaster

And takes us back

To a time forgotten

When the power is lost

And we are all cut off

We made our own entertainment

Like the olden days

Nostalgia for some

New experiences for others

I wish everyday it stormed

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Comments (9)

Dreamy777 on Apr 27, 2011
great one like it
foxpete88 on Apr 27, 2011
A good expression. thanks.-
Cyni1106 on Apr 27, 2011
I love rainy days, I grab a blanket and a cup of coffee and read a good book.
CHIPMUNK on Apr 27, 2011
nice read
shawna y. on Apr 27, 2011
I like the poem but I hate rainy days. Have had to many of them lol.
lian rosa on May 2, 2011
Same here. I do not particularly love rainy days. Love the poem though.
Kata de la Fraye on May 3, 2011
Great poem. Oh I do hate rainy days!
Peace Poet on May 3, 2011
“The Rain” is a very remarkable poem. I like rainy season. thanks for sharing.
eternallucidity on May 6, 2011
I love. You are very good at getting descriptions across, and I love the rain. This poem makes me feel at peace thinking of the rain.

Great work!

Hi there!