The Rain

Yalonda on Mar 26, 2010

A poem I wrote last night after I got the inspiration.

Lay in the room that has no ceiling

Bathed in the weight of all these feelings

Turn off the lights and be soaked by the rain

All the wet droplets drowning the pain

Memories flood past the gates of my mind

Things that were never meant for me to find

Absence fills every molecule of air

It makes me wonder if you were ever really there

But tonight I lay here in the sea of cold rain

Wondering if I will see you again.

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Comments (12)

cardy on Mar 26, 2010
Love you’re thoughts a lovely poem, write, read nice work from you thanks for the share…
chayanika on Mar 26, 2010
neat and nice.. thanks!
Hepsi.M on Mar 26, 2010
“Absence fills every molecule of air” — so true,very well-expressed
Michael Eboh on Mar 26, 2010
Nice read. Thanks.
john tugano on Mar 26, 2010
very nice..worth a read…
Precious Illusions on Mar 27, 2010
aww…thats such a beautiful poem Yalonda…the words…just so appropriate…
LOVELYHONEY on Mar 27, 2010
It’s a beautiful depiction

Of natural rain

Of an occurrence in human life

As it does once in a way rain

I shall get back to you again

When the rain

Gives you some pain

When it does again

Lovely write lovely

lhlhlh

the snap is exquisite toooo
Shamanz on Mar 27, 2010
Just been reading some of your poems lately, must say you have a way with words!
Jimmy Shilaho on Mar 28, 2010
A very good poem, keep it up.
qasimdharamsy on Mar 29, 2010
Nice one….
klev.f on Mar 30, 2010
wow im not really into poetry but i loved this one it was great
maranatha on Apr 1, 2010
Beautiful image to go with your words!

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