Life in the raw, and as real as real can be.

Taken to the edge of reality

can be the very thing

that awakens a person

out of the fog

and clears out the smog.

Responsibility then kicks in

taking precedence from within.

Lessons are learned hard

and feelings are left jarred.

Life can pierce and hurt like the dickens.

Mostly we run around like chickens.

It is a pity the shape the world is in

and this is the way it has long since been.

Heartache after heartache

and worry after worry.

Always just enough to make the knees quake.

Love isn’t always enough it seems,

showing only what obviously gleams.

We worry about what we should not.

We love what we should not.

We live for what we should not.

Mostly we want what we have not.

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  • jimbob1 on Apr 11, 2010

    DB…this is a very insightful, thought-provoking write and read…an amazing perception into the realities of life and the things which are ultimately very important and take priority over the frivolity that we all get involved in from time to time…the frivolities are like a release mechanism to distract us from real life situations as they are in the real world…thanks for the reality check…it is definitely worthy of an I Like It vote…

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