Let your mind sail…

Come, have a taste of the recipe

It will soothe you to sweet bliss

Surrender your mind to the pleasure chest

Let your vulnerabilities set sail

The recipe will relieve all of your inhibitions

Taking you to the Twinkies zone

Twenty miles outside the twilight zone

Feel yourself floating, crossing over the moon

The recipe will rocket you through time and space

Leaving you on cloud nine, eating delectable cupcakes

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  • LovelyWolf on Jan 8, 2010

    awesome…iliked it

  • ken bultman on Jan 8, 2010

    That’s my kind of recipe. Poetically delicious.

  • Themax on Jan 8, 2010

    awesome and sweet poem Thanks and happy new year to you mate :)

  • Lady Sunshine on Jan 8, 2010

    Now you’ve done it Shirley…I’m craving Twinkies and cupcakes! lol. Yummy piece.

  • magicdarts on Jan 8, 2010

    nice one and even better as we float through it all – zero calorie gain!

  • Ruby Hawk on Jan 8, 2010

    it must be a delectable recipe.

  • qasimdharamsy on Jan 9, 2010

    Nice one… i like it….

  • Val Mills on Jan 9, 2010

    Ken said it all above. Well done.

  • Jane Jane on Jan 9, 2010

    Wow, sounds like an exciting trip.

  • albert1jemi on Jan 9, 2010

    great write

  • AlmaG on Jan 18, 2010

    This poem is so magical and I love the ending.. truly sweet :D

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