Rescued and set free.

 

Once, in the midst of all the recklessness,

I felt that my world was falling apart.

Then you suddenly appeared in my life,

with a smile you captured my heart.

 

You rescued me from the recklessness,

my spirit has finally been set free.

For me there will never be another man,

in your arms is where I want to be.

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  • Vince Shocker Knight on Mar 24, 2009

    Cool poem i love it.

  • Emma J Kerry on Mar 24, 2009

    This is really sweet and romantic. I like it.

  • rajeev bhargava on Mar 24, 2009

    a really romantic poem and ever so sweet. i like it.

  • Colleen Ranney on Mar 24, 2009

    What a great feeling this poem offers.I like it

  • STEVE666 on Mar 24, 2009

    One of your best.

  • Alicia Wind on Mar 24, 2009

    There’s always be the only one… !

  • Peter Cimino on Mar 24, 2009

    I love the short, emotional, heartfelt and meaningful poems. Well done!

  • kns1992 on Mar 24, 2009

    Beautiful, I absolutely love this

  • Sandra A Flowers on Mar 24, 2009

    very beautiful, full of love and romance,

  • S M Blomker on Mar 24, 2009

    nice poetry you have written.

  • Kate Smedley on Mar 25, 2009

    That’s so romantic! You have such a flair for writing this poems.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Mar 25, 2009

    It comes from the heart,
    When love is ones’,
    Intense emotional part.
    How it comes to u
    I cannot say.
    It’s some hurt,
    Somewhere.
    It is trying to emerge.
    Some day it shall,
    In joy and happiness,
    Converge
    LH

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