A poem I wrote about a beautiful rare bird of prey called the red kite. I hope you all like it!

O raptor caught in rapturous flight,
So high you’re almost out of sight,
Soaring silently alone,
All open space is now your own,
The open marsh, the open bog,
The hazy mountains smoking fog,
On these gusty currents you sail,
Through the clouds and through the gale.
You possess, o rarest of creatures,
The finest of feathered features,
Your slate visage and two-pronged tail,
And eyes so sharp, they never fail,
Now I doubt there is as good a sight,
Than seeing you, my friend, the rare red kite.

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  • Darla Smith on Jan 12, 2009

    This is a beautiful poem and I love it!

  • basky on Jan 13, 2009

    hats off to you. keep it coming. i enjoy the more i read.

  • nutuba on Jan 13, 2009

    Nicely done! It’s smooth and I like the rhythm.

  • The List Hero on Jan 16, 2009

    Good stuff!

    Your No.1 Fan x

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