Story of a young camper who went AWOL once too often.

Me and Jim and Henry and his older brother Zeke
As kids would go a-camping down along the creek.
We’d eat more beanie weenies than four boys should hold
And play as though we’re searching for some pirate’s gold.
                   
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Now me and Jim and Henry thought the fun was great
But Zeke would always leave before it got too late.
He’d jump upon his bike and pedal in toward town
And not come back till once the evening sun went down.
                          
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Every time we camped the story was the same.
Zeke would eat his supper but when the time came
He’d hop on that old bicycle and down the road he’d go
To somewhere me and Jim and Henry did not know.
                         
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Zeke was fifteen and I suppose he thought
He was too old for us and that he ought
To spread his wings a little like an older kid
But he sure missed out on all the things we did.
                        
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Well, as it turned out, Zeke was having lots of fun
With that new girl whose dad had a big shotgun.
Zeke didn’t have to leave the camp and all our fun
But he did have to get married.  That’s how things were done. 

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  • Lostash on Jul 30, 2009

    From memory? Loved it as usual Ken!

  • Tanya Wallace on Jul 30, 2009

    A wonderful story poem.I bet zeke wasn’t too happy.lol As always a highly enjoyable read!

  • Mrs Sue Ginger Howard on Jul 30, 2009

    Terrific poem.
    What a memory !!!
    Boyhood memories.
    Cool.

  • sandie on Jul 30, 2009

    was it a shot gun wedding lol!

  • Uma Shankari on Jul 30, 2009

    Hope Zeke had fun getting married.

  • Cynthia Bartlett on Jul 30, 2009

    Those who indulge bulged
    cute!

  • PR Mace on Jul 30, 2009

    Sounds like a shotgun wedding to me. What a fun poem. Are they still married?

  • Deep Blue on Jul 31, 2009

    Definitely a master class poetry with amusing storylines and ken. Begins well, ends well. A superb rendering Ken.

  • Darla Cooke on Jul 31, 2009

    Very interesting poem.

  • Lady Sunshine on Jul 31, 2009

    lol…great piece! You reap what you sow!

  • Ruby Hawk on Jul 31, 2009

    LOL, I loved that one Ken, that’s the way it was done alright. Poor Zeke shoulda stayed in camp.

  • nadinesimone on Aug 2, 2009

    Well you certainly know how to hold an audience. Good START, Interesting MIDDLE,and, Oh boy what an ending!

    Thank you for sharing your obvious talents with us all.

    Nadine

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