This is for my ex-boyfriend who never cared for me.

Sitting under the narra tree, waiting

The wind blew so strong, never ending

The clouds were so dark, heavy rain would pour

Soon, I could hear the angry thunder roar.

The birds stopped chirping, cicadas ruled

The moon and the stars hid their lights, it was a gloomy mood

The leaves started to fall, so fast, just a blink of an eye

But still time is faster that it passed them by.

Where are you now? You’re very far, out of sight

Do I need to say that we need to celebrate tonight?

Come and see how lovely I am this moment

Do I have to wait for you till forever?

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  • Joanna Maharis on Aug 7, 2011

    The imagery throughout this piece is breathtaking. This piece is like a beautiful painting, utlizing words.

  • rockbleeder on Oct 2, 2011

    Thank you, Joanna for the comment. Every comment makes me more inspired to write poems :)

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