The revelation of being in love is a beautiful thing especially when the feelings are shared by the significant other.

Woven together tightly

is how we cuddle nightly.

Nothing feels sweeter,

nothing could be any neater.

I listen to you breathe

and I don’t believe

I’ve ever been this happy.

I lie awake staring

 out of the window at a full moon,

enjoying a peaceful night in June.

How beautiful it is all full in color

just hanging there in the sky,

as I lie here next to my guy.

You wake up from time to time

and look at me

with your smiling eyes,

and I whisper “go to sleep my sweet prince,

for it will soon be time to rise.”

You dutifully turn over,

and just like that

you were sound asleep.

I am still unable to catch up with sleep.

I think it’s because of the full moon

and that I am so happy,

I could just leap.

Too much energy to sleep.

I am in love

and in love deep.

A smile comes across my face

at my new revelation.

No wonder I feel I could run a race.

I must awaken you

so that we can share in this together.

I gently touch your hair

as light as a feather.

I whisper in your ear

that I have something to tell you.

You immediately awaken ready to hear.

I look at you with a loving expression

and begin to tell you my revelation.

I realized that I am in love with you.

Not knowing how you would react

I divert my eyes away from you.

You touch my face with a gentle hand

and said, “I’m glad, because I love you too.”

We melted into each others arms

happy to have each other,

as the one and only lover.

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Comments (6)
  • Oversoul on Feb 3, 2010

    nice poem…i enjoyed reading it

  • jimbob1 on Feb 3, 2010

    DB…This is a wonderful, semi-sensual poem…quite prophetic telling your prince to go back to sleep (for it will soon be time to rise) and then a few minutes later you are whispering in his ear to tell him the secrets of your heart which he shares and which will almost certainly cause him to (rise)!!!! My vivid imagination kind of got away on me when I read that bit of well disguised erotica!!! Anyway, this is a neat poem and I Like It and have registered my vote accordingly.

  • Stan Wilson on Feb 3, 2010

    wow very good and well written….

  • T. S. Lewis on Feb 3, 2010

    Listen and wait here comes the Ahhhhhhhhhhhh…. Very nice

  • LOVELYHONEY on Feb 4, 2010

    What a rise
    the sun and the lover both did rise

    gr888 thought a

    nd wonderful 22222222222222
    lhlhlh

  • LOVELYHONEY on Feb 4, 2010

    did i hear some ones

    ahhhhhhhhhhhh

    oooooooooooooooooo lalalala

    wowowowowowow

    what late reaction better

    late than never
    lhlhlh

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