Thoughts about the role we play in the state of the world.

Well, the world says that now you’ve left them,
They said that you didn’t care.
“What manner of God leaves the poor un-fed,
Unloved, and with nothing to wear?”

They cannot believe in a saviour
Whose presence they cannot detect.
Whose loving kindness they once heard of
But expectations, they haven’t been met.

They gaze into the eyes of the starving
And wince at the pain of the bruised.
“How can a God who’s all-knowing
Not cease the killings on the news?”

Why does it not occur to their understanding,
You’ve always been here – never left.
You’ve already helped the poor and the starving
By putting a heart in my chest.

Your hands keep on wiping the tears of the lonely
Because you’ve given them mine – as a friend.
The suffering should never go hungry and homeless
Because you’ve given me food I can send.

You’ve lavished the world in all your glory
And filled even the soil with great wealth.
You’ve hidden diamonds in the mountains
And given me nature-foods for good health.

You’ve planned in all your majestic glory
To provide for me, your offspring.
You’ve endowed me with un-foretold wisdom
And left me in charge of your everything.

You’ve trusted me to keep your world going
And asked me not to covet for my own.
Yet I’ve gathered the poor’s wealth to my bosom
And then blamed you for leaving them alone.

Please let me see, before I ask the questions
That you’ve given me more than enough to go around,
But it’s me that’s not extending
The riches I reap from your ground.

The riches I reap from your ground
The riches I refuse to pass around

The riches I latch onto while the poor are dying… rotting in the ground.

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  • Glynis Smy on Nov 15, 2008

    Amazing, thought provoking words! We are blind and selfish at times, we call it self survival, but it is greed in its rawest form.

  • Karen Gross on Nov 15, 2008

    How very true! It breaks our hearts to see suffering, yet what can we do? We can do whatever God gives us the means to do. He already knows where all of the diamonds are buried. He has provided plenty to nourish all – but some are overfed while others go hungry. Just imagine what the church could do if every member just tithed regularly. We could get back the reputation that the church can care for the sick and the poor. But for now, a good step is to sponsor children, so that the next generation may be nourished and educated.

  • BC Doan on Nov 15, 2008

    This is really a provoking thought. It makes me asking if I am giving or doing enough to help out!

  • sue mcverry on Nov 15, 2008

    It says it all doesn’t it. The feelings of frustration and powerlessness that we all have. Yet, if everyone gave to the best of their ability AND if it was distributed properly, we COULD make things better even though not perfect. Thanks for the thought-provoking read.

  • Anne Lyken Garner on Nov 15, 2008

    i’ve submitted a fix for this. It’s meant to be in stanzas.

  • Judy Sheldon on Nov 15, 2008

    Anne, don’t worry about the appearance, it’s the content and it’s beautiful. God wants us to give and we cannot out give God. How we can blame him for what we (as a people) have hoarded or mismanaged? In this country they pay farmers to sit on their land because there are too many crops harvested???

    Take care and God bless. God bless the poem too! I’m bookmarking.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Nov 15, 2008

    if people only learn selflessness, this world will be much happier…no sufferings,no miseries…no hunger and thirst

  • Terri Lane on Nov 15, 2008

    A lovely heart felt, heart moving poem Anne. The poor will always be with us but that doesn’t mean we should just get used to them. A little goes a long way and people appreciate not just the gift but the love that goes with it.

  • Reilley on Nov 15, 2008

    Remarkable piece, very well done. Thought provoking as well.

  • Joie Schmidt on Nov 15, 2008

    This is quite striking and profound. Your message is poignant. Well done.

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 15, 2008

    It is beyond our little minds to comprehend the spirit of the universe. We do what we can for those who have less and have faith we are full filling the purpose of our existence.Your poem
    shows that you are a caring person. Best wishes, Ruby

  • valli on Nov 15, 2008

    Awesome poetry.

  • eddiego65 on Nov 15, 2008

    Excellent one! Thanks for reminding that all we possess have its source from God. And we are here to share them to bless others.

  • Anne Lyken Garner on Nov 29, 2008

    Thanks for your kind comments, everyone. I really do appreciate it.

  • Louie Jerome on Dec 16, 2008

    Thought provoking.

  • Nick Kenney on Feb 10, 2009

    The only thing left to say is “Amen”.
    Kudos, Anne…

  • Fegger on Feb 28, 2009

    Anne–thank you for identifying this on my page for easier access–it’s been a worthwhile trip for me; and yes, I see similarity…mine may only suggest that God takes some accountability for the freedoms. What you’ve created is very solid and provocative.

  • grace85 on Feb 28, 2009

    powerful piece, well done!!

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