Another great one!

sometimes we feel so bad in the relationship, that evasion and escape look as the ultimate answer.
My claps for your poem, very good.

Excellent poem – really caught me this one!

This poem makes me wish you could or would explain stanza by stanza. It holds depth character and just as I’m about to really let it in…it loses me or I lost it. I don’t know. The ending was a bit cryptic for me.

Great imagery. I like the unexpectedness of the line “Climb out of the bleeding gash.” it is a poem about finding control again after pain. “washing away pain” can become cliche…but this is not, it is well arranged, nicely done.

So true and so real excellent poem.

Honestly, I don’t like this poem very much. It is a bit cliched, and nothing about it truly stikes me. The only very good thing about it was the way that it flowed, it was almost perfect.

“Like the beautiful grey clouds”

The word “beautiful” is just so vague that I just can’t picture the clouds. I don’t know what exactly you’re comparing the clouds to either, so I found this to be a bit confusing.

“And then I feel
So free”

I understand what you’re attempting to do here, but I don’t really think that it worked very well. “So free” is just the most ridiculous description of it ever. It is just so vague, I don’t get any emotion out of it.
My favorite quote is “no tears in the writer, no tears in the reader”, and I just don’t feel any emotion in this piece.

Your main problem is being vague. I have a feeing that you could write really well if you wanted to. Just be careful about how you word things.

Beautiful work. It really makes me think

interesting,nice