….bathtime.

 

The Ritual

At the first greying shade of darkness
how sensual it is to indulge
in a long, involved bath time.

The room swirls with steam
from the deliciously hot water.

Carefully arranged scented candles
flicker their soft relaxing light.

After dripping my favourite perfumed oils into the water,
I sprinkle the surface with rose petals and cedar leaves
to create an intoxicating brew.

The fragrance is overpowering.

I slowly sink into the warm water,
helpless as it envelopes my body.

Sipping a glass of my favourite red wine,
I relax from the pressures of the day
and allow my thoughts to drift toward him.

… SweetpeepsLJ 11/09

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  • Darla Cooke on Nov 11, 2009

    Very nice poem!

  • Tanya Wallace on Nov 11, 2009

    This is a very creative and visual poem!Terrific work Sweetpeeps!Glad to have you back!

  • Linda Lori on Nov 21, 2009

    Wonderful poem about the magical bath! =)

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