The River

BryanSandberg on Jul 3, 2009

A boy and girl meet in poetic fashion.

He looks at her.

She looks at him.

Fire, fire, fire

Swim

He goes to the girl

She goes to the boy

Drown, drown, drown

Enjoy

He says hello

She only smiles

Float, float, float

Awhile

He takes her hand

Off she goes

And the river, river, river

Flows

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Keyholder13 on Jul 3, 2009
i like it…i really do like the way you thought this out.good job man keep it up and you will get that dollar in no time
gringoperry on Jul 4, 2009
Another good work, hows the quest for the dollar going?
Cristina Sandberg on Jul 16, 2009
Good Job my son. Great!

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