The River

Darla Cooke on Oct 21, 2009

Tags: clean, clear, Haiku, River, sparkling, Sunlight

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Haiku.

Image via Wikipedia

The river flows deep

Reflecting the bright sunlight

Clear, sparkling and clean

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Comments (21)

ken bultman on Oct 21, 2009
Very refreshing.
giftarist on Oct 21, 2009
Nice haiku!
Papa Sparks on Oct 21, 2009
Good choice of words and vivid imagery.
raman13 on Oct 21, 2009
excellent
Yovita Siswati on Oct 21, 2009
beautiful imagery!
cardy on Oct 21, 2009
Lovely!!
Roberto Sardelli 1 on Oct 21, 2009
agree with Cardy, lovely
Colleen Ranney on Oct 21, 2009
wonderful!
alc on Oct 21, 2009
A breath of fresh air!
Christine Ramsay on Oct 21, 2009
Beautiful work
Vikram Chhabra on Oct 21, 2009
Very beautiful. I felt it!!
maranatha on Oct 21, 2009
I can almost hear the bubbling. Great pic!
Emma Green on Oct 21, 2009
Another great haiku!
Diverseblogger on Oct 21, 2009
Awesome Haiku! Keep up the great work
Tanya Wallace on Oct 21, 2009
You are an expert on haiku!Excellent stuff!
Linda Lori on Oct 22, 2009
Great Haiku, and beautiful picture!
STEVE666 on Oct 22, 2009
Neat, Haiku.
larry84 on Oct 22, 2009
Short and simple I liked it!
razumtina on Oct 23, 2009
Beautiful!!!!
wonder on Oct 24, 2009
Interesting thoughts.
Teves on Oct 28, 2009
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