The River

Catrina Markus on Nov 2, 2009

Tags: catrina markus, green, waters

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HAIKU.

Down by the river where the temperature is cool

The green waters are reflecting the sun

I love the river I love to swim in it

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Comments (4)

Bo Jack Russo on Nov 2, 2009
Cathy, I like the poem but it has too many syllables for Haiku!
ceegirl on Nov 2, 2009
nice
alc on Nov 2, 2009
Great job!
cutedrishti8 on Nov 2, 2009
Great piece of write

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