The River (Tanka)

Martin Kloess on Jan 26, 2012

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Tanka – reflection.

I feel her passing
Her secret to the river
Which had no sparkle
On that cold and bitter night
That she chose to say goodbye

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Boyka on Jan 26, 2012
I Like It
lapasan on Jan 26, 2012
Since the river has no sparkle her secret will not be known.
LadyElena on Jan 26, 2012
Lovely Haiku.
Nidhi Rai on Jan 27, 2012
Very nice.

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