Reflective sonnet.

He sat alone reflecting on this room
This space which held such wonders of his life
This place where sounds of laughter were once rife
This trace is now his dark and dusty tomb

Was there his friend would meet his future bride
Was there that couples danced throughout the night
And there were William hid to stir up fright
Now there where shadows left him to subside

It seems that all have passed and gone their way
Their space replaced by echoes of some past
Their place in wonder was it meant to last
Their trace is now a part of his dismay

He sat alone when eyes began to close
And as they did the sound of party rose

 

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Comments (13)
  • Lisa Marie Mottert on Feb 2, 2012

    Nice piece :)

  • tankermone on Feb 2, 2012

    Lonely memories!

  • Paul Roberts on Feb 2, 2012

    You can \”feel\” this poem. well done.

  • erwinkennythomas on Feb 2, 2012

    alone in the dark

  • Eunike on Feb 2, 2012

    so lonely

  • Safa on Feb 2, 2012

    You can actually feel what is being said. Excellent work!

  • Nidhi Rai on Feb 3, 2012

    Wonderful.

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Feb 3, 2012

    And then was he happy?

  • aheed411 on Feb 3, 2012

    I like this
    Wow

  • dodolbete on Feb 3, 2012

    Sounds so lonely ^_^

  • xphantoms on Feb 3, 2012

    good poem and image

  • J L Carey Jr on Feb 3, 2012

    &)

  • Dora77 on Feb 3, 2012

    Dear Martin,

    I just agree with whatever is been told by Other Commentator’s here.Just fabulous.
    Thanks
    Dora

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