The Rope is Snapping

Lile13 on Mar 27, 2010

Tags: Broke, broken, broken in, dark, frayed, frayed rope, gloom, help, Hope, joy, no hope, poem, Poetry, rope, snap, Snapping, stress, stretched, stretched out, stretching, the rope will snap, wearing, will, worn down

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The rope will snap…

I’m just about to snap.

Anger, rage,

the rope is singeing

stretched.

Broken, thin, stressed.

It just can’t stand it anymore.

The edge is wearing it down,

making the thread thinner, weaker.

No joy. No hope.

It’s snapping.

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Comments (3)

Linley Alexander on Mar 27, 2010
This made me feel trapped. But I like it. Great write!
Lile13 on Mar 28, 2010
That’s the idea. I was in an especially gloomy mood. :’(
Lile13 on Sep 27, 2010
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