The rush every morning having to get up early.

The alarm beeps,
Ringing in your ears.
The reality,
That it is time to get up after your precious dreams.
The day will be dim,
You have to go to the gym.
Always the same,
No-one to blame.
You want to give it the brush,
But it is the morning rush.

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  • derrickblogs on Feb 4, 2009

    good job nice poetry!

  • Likha on Feb 4, 2009

    I know how it feels but thank God I still have mornings to wake up to no matter how frenzy they are.

  • Pete Macinta on Feb 4, 2009

    Likha wrote …
    I know how it feels but thank God I still have mornings to wake up to no matter how frenzy they are.

    I’ll add….
    Aye! Routines can be bummers at times, but every day with Jesus is sweeter than the day before.

  • nutuba on Feb 4, 2009

    You captured the morning rush perfectly! Nice flow and a sense of urgency.

  • mikky webs on Feb 4, 2009

    Well put. Thanks for sharing.

  • C Jordan on Feb 4, 2009

    Yep,You got it. I know mornings like that.

  • Betty Carew on Feb 4, 2009

    I use to know mornings like that now my biggest rush is letting the dogs out lol. great poem denus

  • Mermush on Feb 4, 2009

    YEP exactly wot i wake up to everyday…may b not gym lol…but u kno d usual..hehe

  • seashell66 on Feb 4, 2009

    Very well worded.

  • Bick Parker on Feb 4, 2009

    Morning rush? What’s that? I’ve only got one speed – slow!

    Seriously though, you’ve done a nice little job with this one.

  • Darla Smith on Feb 4, 2009

    I definitely know what morning rush is like.

  • Brent on Feb 4, 2009

    Dude! i thought this was supposed to be about the ‘morning rush’? 61 syllables and that’s all you got?

  • Adam Henry Sears on Feb 4, 2009

    Actually, no offense denus, but I agree with Brent: you didn’t elaborate very well. I have 10 times more thoughts than that in the mornings. Other than that, I like the way you went from free verse to free form in the short number lines you have, kind of implying the same structure in our morning routines. Thanks for sharing.

  • nesita on Feb 4, 2009

    I could agree with that.

  • S Air on Feb 4, 2009

    Good job!

  • rutherfranc on Feb 4, 2009

    rush? I usually press the snooze button 10x before getting up.. and that is to go back to sleep on the couch..

  • IreniaPehuajo on Feb 4, 2009

    Why did you mention the alarm clock…gggrrrrrr
    Bye

  • Ruby Hawk on Feb 4, 2009

    Gotta get up and go.

  • Joie Schmidt on Feb 4, 2009

    Interesting poem – - I love the part of going after your dreams!

    ALL YOUR DREAMS ARE COMING TRUE!

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • George W Whitehead on Feb 5, 2009

    Nice poem, Denus.

  • Fornis on Feb 7, 2009

    Very nice poem denus. I came back once again to read this. Rhyming well and describing my routine well some time back.
    Now I wake up as if sleeping again is uncomfortable.
    ha.. ha.. ha..

  • Maggie Hoffie on Feb 10, 2009

    Great poem! Keep it up denus!

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