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The Scarlet Umbrella

Lady Sunshine on Dec 16, 2009
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A man and woman kiss underneath a red umbrella.

Scarlet umbrella
Shelter in the pouring rain
Refuge from the storm

Image via Wikipedia

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  • T. S. Lewis on Dec 16, 2009

    Very nice. The image is wonderful. Any connotations from the Scarlet Letter?

  • ken bultman on Dec 16, 2009

    Wonderful haiku…great protection from the elements regardless of color. Come to think of it, kissing in the rain sans umbrella ain’t bad.

  • johnnydod on Dec 16, 2009

    Oh Sunshine what a great haiku wonderful

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 16, 2009

    A really good haiku.

  • cardy on Dec 16, 2009

    Loved this nice write form you.

  • Guy Hogan on Dec 16, 2009

    So this is how good haiku can be. What an art form.

  • Atanacio on Dec 16, 2009

    Sunshine, this was Perfect :)

  • Papa Sparks on Dec 16, 2009

    Nice one my friend. Liked the imagery in this one.

  • 8Shei8 on Dec 16, 2009

    I love the picture. Your words say it all!

  • AlmaG on Dec 16, 2009

    A romantic sight

  • LOVELYHONEY on Dec 17, 2009

    what is the refuge

    the umbrella

    or the kiss

    which ma’am

    lovely
    honey

  • Yovita Siswati on Dec 17, 2009

    romantically playful!

  • papaleng on Dec 17, 2009

    Oh Sunshine that was a very sweet Haiku.

  • bailieman on Dec 17, 2009

    Nicely done.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Dec 17, 2009

    change the umbrella dear

    the sun is shining

    so are you

    but where’s the next umbrella

    now please show that too

  • Shirley Shuler on Dec 19, 2009

    Hi Lady Sunshine, An excellent Haiku, love the picture!

  • Black Enigma on Dec 24, 2009

    gr8 picture! good stuff!

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