The Sculptor

ShadowPsychos on Jul 13, 2010

About being with someone and them constantly changing you to suit themselves.

The sky is on fire

with a thousand ravage induced deeds

and you hold yourself in me

that way that brings me to my knees

with that inward glance

that says i will do as i please

and your mouth

from my emptiness it feeds

from that worn out heart of mine

a bleeding banquet of clouds, never divided

you chain me up, i am bound to your leash

amputation of any imperfections that i bare

is what you set out to destroy

leaving me lifeless, undecided

limbless, i am undone

reworked to you idealistic nature

symmetry to your broken lens

distraught you’ve beheaded me of my own thoughts

i grieve for the life i will never lead

you are the sculptor of me

your never ending masterpiece

telling me not to hold myself that way

but you’ve rendered me powerless

i cannot oblige with heart anymore

my core is numb, transparent in my ways

you are the fire inside my voice

the visions of sky i will always greet

even when the moon breaks its pardon over me

your blazing eyes still reach deep

threatening to change me on into the every day

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Comments (16)

aman259 on Jul 13, 2010
Great write dear friend
Jimmy Shilaho on Jul 13, 2010
Well expressed but that picture……
Lord Banks on Jul 13, 2010
A brilliant one that conveys how you are feeling from the inside or being influenced by swoene who is over-bering and demmanding, David.
PARAM on Jul 13, 2010
excellent work…
Vaibhav Diwaker on Jul 13, 2010
Nice piece with matching photographs……….keep it up…….
TwiKnight on Jul 13, 2010
Nice one, though all chains will rust someday, and all shall be undone…
Tom Woodside on Jul 13, 2010
awesome poem and that last pic. Nice!
suhail on Jul 13, 2010
picture perfect thoughts … loved it …
Christine Ramsay on Jul 13, 2010
A very powerful and expressive piece. Well done.

Christine
drishti8 on Jul 13, 2010
Very great piece of write up.
wonder on Jul 13, 2010
A powerful piece.
crucisis on Jul 13, 2010
thats heart wrenching. Extremely powerful words.
Atanacio on Jul 13, 2010
damn this was another great write YOU ARE GOOD
monica55 on Jul 13, 2010
Excellent description: That person wants to confine you in his grips, but you are going to break through the chains and regain your freedom.
Monica.
T. S. GARP on Jul 13, 2010
Very deep, well done!
rajaryanme on Jul 14, 2010
A wonderful entry once again.

Hi there!