A poem


As deep and mysterious

As the universe

Vivacious and vicarious

As the gulls cry

Lifting my spirit

To the crest of the wave

Before crashing

Into the depths of the ocean

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  • Jonathon Robert Dutton on Jun 16, 2007

    I like it,keep up the good work

  • jOE on Jan 4, 2008

    LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Meri Jeffrey on Jan 19, 2008

    another wonderful poem!!!!

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Apr 6, 2008

    wow… only WOW..with an exclamation point!

  • wink on Aug 5, 2008

    Lucy,

    Very cool imagery!! I can see myself at Ocracoke, NC fishing off the shore when I read this!!! You need to make more like this!!!

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