What is wrong with a little imagination when it helps you endure the humdrum life of the city?

He thought he was upon a ship

And miles away from land -

But he was just a seagull

Who didn’t understand;

The mast he rode so proudly

A flagpole – nothing more,

The smell of fish was Billingsgate,

The noise – the Traffic’s roar.

No crashing ocean breakers,

No silver flash of fish,

No homing ship to follow -

A lonely seagull’s wish.

But still he gazed around him

And saw what he would see,

A cloudless sky above him,

Below the shining sea.

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  • Glynis Smy on Nov 24, 2008

    wonderful! great work.

  • Enzo Silvestri on Nov 24, 2008

    Once again, great imagery

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 24, 2008

    I really loved that Terri. I can really visualise the scene, so well described.

  • Darlene McFarlane on Nov 24, 2008

    Another excellent one, Terri. You have a wonderful imagination and I am so glad you share it with us.

  • Melissa Joyce on Nov 28, 2008

    You are really good at this. Your poems flow so nicely.

  • Jeoffrey Meister on Nov 29, 2008

    Good, Terri! Flows so nice; good rhyme scheme.

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