The Seven Last Words (Haiku)

ronthoughts on Mar 19, 2010

Tags: arts, Lent, literature, Poetry

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A thought on Lent.

THE SEVEN LAST WORDS (HAIKU)

One

Father

Forgive

Ignorance

Two

Today Father

Be with you

In your kingdom

Three

Women

Behold

Thy Son

Four

Father

Why forgotten

Son

Five

I—

Thirst

: Love

Six

My

Mission

Is done!

Seven

With your hands

My Father

I offer myself.

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ronthoughts on Mar 19, 2010
A thought on Lent!
deep blue on Mar 19, 2010
Very well expressed, kabayan. In Japanese they said those were the meaningful words uttered by the dying. Our saviour indeed made a haiku without further thought on making Japanese poetry.
giftarist on Mar 19, 2010
Wow, never thought of it. Thanks for sharing this, kabayan.
8Shei8 on Mar 19, 2010
This is unique write. Wonderful thoughts.
Christine Ramsay on Mar 20, 2010
A good reminder of what the season of Easter is all about.

Christine
nobert soloria bermosa on Mar 20, 2010
very well presented,thanks for the timely reminder
Alive11 on Mar 21, 2010
Very Impressive write
Goodselfme on Mar 25, 2010
A true offering in well chosen words.
xoxo on Mar 25, 2010
Brilliant write sir. Well done!
Melody SJAL on Mar 27, 2010
Very creative and nicely done.
diamondpoet on Mar 28, 2010
Impressed nicely, and a very emotional piece. thanks for sharing.
maeraquel on Mar 29, 2010
napapanahong babasahin!

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