A piece of me…

She made a mistake-
Unintentionally killed herself.
It wasn’t suppose to happen this time
She accidentally slipped and fell-
cracking her heart open, She thought
it would release the pain. But
instead it backfired. Shattered….and the pieces
now infect her as she reflects on what she did.

She walks along the ocean of her fleshy tides,
now collecting the shards she mistakenly broke.
Looks at them thinking-
They are beautiful now in a different way
Feeling the fall may happen yet again.

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  • Liane Schmidt on Nov 19, 2007

    This is beautiful and tragic. I can feel the pain and sorrow in it.

    Best wishes.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Nick Kenney on Dec 12, 2007

    WHOA! Yet another one wracked with pain… are you okay?
    This is beautiful but so full of anguish and torment…

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