It’s beautiful to me.

And the waves swept past me tonight
Their force, the shimmer
Was almost too much, you see

Caught up in the motion
The stars, the sky, the tranquility
Of the vast, deep unending sea

I closed my eyes and let the current take me away
I felt every rise and fall
And, I allowed my body to relax
And submit in every way

There was no more need to fight
There was no more need to fear
For my heart had finally learned
How to trust the waves that night

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  • Dee Huff on Nov 14, 2007

    Lovely poem.

  • IcyCucky on Nov 14, 2007

    Just beautiful, Liane.

  • Heart Stone on Nov 15, 2007

    Simply wonderful. Thanks for sharing.

  • Nick Kenney on Nov 16, 2007

    Beautiful, Liane…

  • Lucy Lockett on Nov 17, 2007

    Go with the flow of the tide…

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