A poem inspired by some beautiful moments passed on a lake somewhere in Europe.

       The silent lake is all around

        And far away I see the ground

        The blue of water fills my heart

         Just like a lovely work of art.

         I know I left them all behind

         No fear,no worries here to find

          It’s only peace and solitude

          And that’s what makes me feel so good.

         How can I leave this paradise

         And go back to the world of lies?

        Oh,lake!Forever stay within my sight

        Give me more freedom and more light!

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Comments (11)
  • Ebbin Jose on Jun 10, 2011

    Nice story from the lover of solitude

  • Ebbin Jose on Jun 10, 2011

    Nice poem from the lover of solitude

  • mphsglo on Jun 10, 2011

    Nice poem and nice picture.

  • isloooboy on Jun 11, 2011

    Very nicely elaborated poem nice work

  • realityspeaks on Jun 11, 2011

    Nice share

  • yellow rose on Jun 11, 2011

    nice,beautiful…

  • Inzimam on Jun 13, 2011

    very well,i liked it..

  • alxymy on Jun 14, 2011

    brings me back to my own solitude and lake

  • vietnam on Jun 14, 2011

    when the sky and lake r blue
    they have their own hue
    lovely poetry from you

  • KittyK on Oct 7, 2011

    How lovely – .Lakes are serene and so peaceful…

  • Gerard Galvestini on Oct 13, 2011

    Nice picture to go with the poem

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