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The Silk Bed

Nikita K on Jul 12, 2009
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A haiku.
I am not a big fan of writing poems but this is my first haiku ever and I would like your feedback please!

Creamy silky sheets

are spread on my feather bed

but still I can’t sleep.

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  • Albert on Jul 12, 2009

    I do like it! It has great rhytm.

  • Lostash on Jul 12, 2009

    I’m not a big fan of haiku, but this seems as good as any to me!

  • Darla Cooke on Jul 12, 2009

    Perfect haiku! You did very well at your first attempt.

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