Hiding in the long brown grass.

Image via Wikipedia

Image via Wikipedia

Hiding in the long, brown grass,

with serpent wiles; he waits to pass,

a traveler along this course,

and quickly feeling no remorse;

he secrets himself in quiet pose

and quickly kills the birthing prose.

Without pause or inhibition,

he blocks the writers true ambition,

and strangling all sense of worth;

he hides himself back in the earth,

to await another bright and fair;

who stumbles upon his hidden lair.

Deceit and guile are his domain;

without a thought inside his brain,

his hardened heart holds no care,

for those who compose so unaware;

that such a foul creature does exist

and hides alone among the mist.

 

1
Liked it
Comments (5)
  • lxdollarsxl on Dec 11, 2010

    Ducking beneath the parapet
    Surely one day he will regret
    To rue the day he messed up like a clown
    No longer able to hide within this trond town

  • UncleSammy on Dec 11, 2010

    Cool- Nice share sir

  • bigpapadan on Dec 11, 2010

    ROFLMAO-Thanks guys.

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Dec 11, 2010

    I like the rhythm and rhyme.

  • bigpapadan on Dec 11, 2010

    Thank you LEO, I appreciate it.

Leave a Comment

Hi there!

Hello! Welcome to Authspot, the spot for creative writing.
Read some stories and poems, and be sure to subscribe to our feed!

Find the Spot

Loading