Comments on: The Song of Morning Star

By: Adam Henry Sears

Adam Henry Sears — Wed, 08 Apr 2009 20:22:58 +0000

I like werewolves too. I love the visuals in this, especially the second couplet. Thanks for sharing.

By: Stickinthemud

Stickinthemud — Tue, 07 Apr 2009 20:02:25 +0000

Hi, Annie, how are you?
I like this one a lot. I love anything to do with werewolves, I have no idea why…perhaps it’s the idea of changing. Anyway, this one certainly has a nice rhythm to it, and I like the idea that you based it on a native legend. Cool! Thanks for this, have a good one.

By: MrZebra84

MrZebra84 — Thu, 26 Mar 2009 17:38:50 +0000

This is definitely one of the more interesting poems I’ve seen while I’ve been wandering around here. Very nice.

By: C. S. Robins

C. S. Robins — Mon, 23 Mar 2009 20:14:26 +0000

Very nicely structured!

By: Bullwinkle Muse

Bullwinkle Muse — Fri, 20 Mar 2009 07:17:25 +0000

This has a nice, and appropriately, galloping cadence which lends nicely to the tale. Loved it.

By: Emma C S

Emma C S — Sun, 15 Mar 2009 18:24:37 +0000

Wow I love it. It has the feel of an old epic or something like that. The rhythm and the language give it a really interesting tone. Fab.

By: Morgana

Morgana — Sun, 15 Mar 2009 16:37:06 +0000

Beautiful, haunting, great rhythm, it certainly was a pleasure to read.

By: Denise Kawaii

Denise Kawaii — Sun, 15 Mar 2009 14:47:06 +0000

I could see her running through the darkness with the pack. Great use of words to paint a picture.

By: Dee Gold

Dee Gold — Sun, 15 Mar 2009 02:57:31 +0000

I like this one

By: Liane Schmidt

Liane Schmidt — Sat, 14 Mar 2009 22:59:04 +0000

Mysterious, interesting and beautiful*

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.