The Sound I Like Haiku

Goodselfme on Nov 16, 2009

Tags: cats, Haiku, poems, Poetry

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It is said that a Haiku should be of nature only. Isn’t everything nature?

Photo of Oliver, my kitty, is by Roberta Baxter

“The Sound I like”

Purring of a cat

Motor boat engine running

The contrast is clear.

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Comments (16)

Kris Snow on Nov 16, 2009
I like how the final line comes through so clearly.
cutedrishti8 on Nov 16, 2009
Nice one..Cute photo too…
Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 16, 2009
dats a gud n humorous haiku composed…nice 1…
ken bultman on Nov 16, 2009
The similarity is there, as well. Handsome kitty.
CHAN LEE PENG on Nov 16, 2009
Thanks for your haiku. I like it. The cat is cute too.
Liane Schmidt on Nov 16, 2009
*:) very sweet *:)

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
Steven West on Nov 16, 2009
Nicely expressed. Fun Haiku.
Mike1229 on Nov 16, 2009
Meow! good stuff
Christine Ramsay on Nov 16, 2009
That is so lovely. A cute picture too.

Christine
cardy on Nov 16, 2009
This is so sweet loved it loved the pic to nice work.
chitragopi on Nov 16, 2009
Lovely cat. deserves the haiku
MMV Abad on Nov 16, 2009
Sweet haiku. Very nice.
Darla Smith on Nov 16, 2009
Very nice haiku.
PR Mace on Nov 16, 2009
Nicely done.
deep blue on Nov 17, 2009
Indeed a great haiku.
papaleng on Nov 17, 2009
Yuor Haiku is endearing.. so is your cat.

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