Still our love sustains us.

The spirit is tired
And longs for rest
The struggle has
Been long with
Our hearts oppressed
Still our love sustains us
And lights our way
Through the darkness
Of doubt and troubles
At play
The future is ours
We say with a smile
And we thank God
For each blessing
As together we
Pass each mile

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  • Naomi Joyce Lewis on Jun 22, 2008

    This poem expresses the strength of the love of two soul mates. I like it.

  • PR Mace on Jun 22, 2008

    What a wonderful way to tell the world about your love. It made my smile and have a better day.

  • ruby Hawk on Jun 22, 2008

    You are a lucky couple. Looking forward to more.

  • tracy sardelli on Jun 23, 2008

    beautiful and endearing, thank you for sharing.

  • deepbluesea on Jun 23, 2008

    Very uplifting.

  • R.B. Parsley on Jun 23, 2008

    This is totally awsome Nick!!! Absolutely beautiful!!!! The love comes shining through like a bright beacon. When the spirit is tired, thats when loved shines the brightest. Keep it up buddy. your on the right track with this one. This is one I\\\’ll keep coming back to for sure!!!

    Randy

  • Lucy Lockett on Jun 27, 2008

    Very nice! Simple but it packs a punch.

  • alexa gates on Jun 28, 2008

    very beautiful poem! you can tell that there is love just by reading this!

  • KathSpring on Jul 3, 2008

    Beautiful and Deep
    Kathy

    ooh and remember Dum Spiro Spero

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