Wouldn’t this be a beautiful sight to see one morning?

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I woke up with a yawn at dawn,
and saw a tiny fawn on my lawn.
The unexpected sight was a delight,
its soft fur shone in the bright light.

I watched the fawn graze on my lawn,
and stifled another early dawn yawn.
He had lots of pretty white spots,
the dots looked like tiny white blots.

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  • mdegenhardt on Oct 10, 2008

    Yes, it would be great to see that each morning. Love the internal rhyme within this write as it carries the reader along smoothly furing the read. Very well written. Michael

  • goodselfme on Oct 10, 2008

    Nice imagery that made me right along side of you in this sighting. Thank you!

  • simplewriter on Jan 22, 2010

    Sounds like a beautiful animal.

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