Dark English sonnet.

The stars and moon where all he could recall
Reflections of the pool beneath his feet
For now reality was in retreat
Towards remnants of a simple lovers’ squall

She said that all that once was is complete
A fact that he no longer could forestall
He still recalls the coldness of it all
A bitter cold now lying in the street

Was this the final future of a kiss
Was this the destiny of lovers’ vow
Was this the silence broken hearts have found

And there the stars and moon he could not miss
Which drift into a nearby gutter now
As he now drops his knife upon the ground

 

 

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  • Razorwind on Jan 19, 2012

    Sad…

  • Lisa Marie Mottert on Jan 19, 2012

    Very sad…

  • Socorro Lawas on Jan 19, 2012

    gloomy but powerful

  • LadyElena on Jan 19, 2012

    aawh… what a sad ending.

  • Marquis de Joker on Jan 19, 2012

    Love… such a pain

  • AmosTheCat on Jan 19, 2012

    Dark, for sure. And very well done. It took three readings for me to catch it all. But then, I’m slow. Loved it.

  • duck01 on Jan 19, 2012

    A dark ending indeed.

  • pogi253 on Jan 19, 2012

    nice poem

  • Eunike on Jan 19, 2012

    Beautiful, romantic, dark

  • pet uy on Jan 20, 2012

    Beautiful and dark! :)

  • ittech on Jan 20, 2012

    Nice job

  • Jay F. Samson on Jan 20, 2012

    Hmm..that’s kind of sad o-o. Beautiful, though!

  • aheed411 on Jan 20, 2012

    It’s great

  • iva75cpb on Jan 20, 2012

    The memory of this will chase him on every moon.

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