After writing "Why are we more afraid of dying than we are of not living?", I didn’t feel completely satisfied.
Now? Now I could use a cigarette.
Ahhh…

The straw of life looms shiny and vast – where does one even start?

Beginning is not an option, but pushing forward takes huge heart.

Hopes and dreams could be here – or there. Where might love be found?

Explore your straw from stem to stern, and all the way around.

You will get bruised along your journey, often bent and maybe broken,

yet, to not live fully ends sadly with regrets – and with words left unspoken.

The straw of life: So long, so bright – so daunting in it’s scope,

that only the truly brave of heart can do more than simply cope.

Of course there’s pain and failure lurking in dark shadows -

It’s what keeps the less courageous cowering in life’s shallows.

The possibilities seem endless, until the end is near -

Why is it always then that things become so clear?

The straw of life narrows suddenly – zigging instead of zagging,

Thoughts of what was squandered finally dawn and they start nagging.

How did we waste our precious life straw that affords no second chance?

We slid through it with our eyes squeezed shut, with nary a sideways glance.

Our straw will twist and turn and bump and grind when we will least expect it,

excuses and distractions will no longer be accepted.

So – use it, abuse it, learn and live large – don’t go without a good fight.

For one thing you can depend on – too soon will come that good night!

The End

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  • Rosettaartist1 on Oct 25, 2011

    Well phrased.

  • girishpuri on Oct 25, 2011

    very deep . i like it

  • AmosTheCat on Oct 25, 2011

    I liked this poem very much. Hopeful and encouraging. Thank you.

  • Martin Kloess on Oct 26, 2011

    Wow impress me, why don’t you. VVG :)

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Oct 26, 2011

    I like it.

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Oct 26, 2011

    Wonderful dear.

  • LoveDoctor on Oct 26, 2011

    There is so much truth in this poem. I agree, pushing forward takes huge hearts. Fear paralyzes some people and as a result, they give up easily without realizing that pain is part of the process to achieving your goals in life. A very encouraging piece.

  • AmateurWriter on Oct 26, 2011

    niceeee

  • Muzammil196 on Oct 26, 2011

    Deep! Insightful!

  • Joe Ram on Oct 26, 2011

    Interesting piece.

  • FX777222999 on Oct 27, 2011

    Good piece indeed.

  • ImKarn23 on Oct 28, 2011

    love doctor: agreeagreeagree!
    Thanks all for reading!

  • Rosettaartist1 on Nov 1, 2011

    I think you should submit to a few magazines.

  • Martin Kloess on Nov 11, 2011

    yes i liked it this much.

  • Arthur Chappell on Nov 28, 2011

    great poem, with a hint of Dylan Thomas

  • CHIPMUNK on Nov 28, 2011

    brilliant poetry

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