The Sun Rose (Poem)

Martin Kloess on Aug 1, 2012

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A lover wakes up to a reality.

The sun rose like most every day
Those things of the past far away
This morning bodes fresh things to say
As once more I rise to this play
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My senses say my love is there
Her scent brings a blossom to air
A kiss to remove worldly care
This dream that my heart now must bear
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What winds wait to welcome the day
What songs will our love tell to air
One wonders will time really care
When seasons of rain come to play
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I look toward my dream while it’s there
Its kisses are drifting away
Now silence has so much to say
And memories such pain to bear
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I think now what started this play
The note on her pillow won’t say
Oh why did my love go away
The sun rose like most every day

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Jswana on Aug 1, 2012
How beautiful. A life-changing event seems so unnatural in light of the fact that natural things haven’t changed a bit but now one’s perception has to change accordingly. Powerful, sad.
KittyK on Aug 1, 2012
Wow…amazing poem/story…
sabanawaz on Aug 2, 2012
beautiful
lrdl3535 on Aug 2, 2012
Nice
gaby7 on Aug 2, 2012
A moving poem here! Thanks Martin!
realityspeaks on Aug 2, 2012
Beautiful.
elee on Aug 2, 2012
very nicee
Derdriu on Aug 2, 2012
Martin, I like it!
Most brilliantly, you’ve chosen one of the repetitive end-word, refrained-phrase, and rhyme scheme poetic formats which I so hold dear: they explore far deeper and wider ranges of feeling and thinking through multiple revisits and re-visits of events (the sunrise, the note, the physical absence despite powerful emotions, memories and traces of what once was).
Respectfully, and with many many many thanks, Derdriu
lauralu on Aug 2, 2012
Very good
stevetheblogger on Aug 2, 2012
Martin yet again wonderful
Best Wishes
stevetheblogger
Kristie Claar on Aug 2, 2012
Great poem
Ponorogozone on Aug 3, 2012
nicd poem.
johnmariow on Aug 3, 2012
Very nice.

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