This is my very first poem I wrote as a permanent writer. It tells us about the beauty of the sun and the memories of school we might treasure.

It’s the end of a lovely day
In the month of May.
Were in year 11.
There’s only less than a year
When were in year 11.
Days like this will move in an instant.
Soon it will be in a far distance.
It’s the end of a lovely day
The sky turning from blue to pink to orange and red.
The sun blaze spreading across the sky.
Telling me not to lie.
To tell everyone about the evenings sun.
So know one will be scared to run.
Every day, every year, the sun will remind me the high school days.
Because every student is represented in the sun’s rays.
Student’s pass away some time, in life time.
That you won’t see them anymore.
There souls are in the sky.
That when you remember them, you’ll cry.

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  • Kim Buck on Oct 22, 2008

    Great reflection of things to be soon missed.

  • Eric Mendoza on Oct 22, 2008

    Very beautiful. I miss the school days sometimes, when I sit and think about how much fun it used to be.

  • bobby on Nov 9, 2008

    You made me think about my friends as well

  • goodselfme on Nov 9, 2008

    Well done.

  • Kimberly Lee on Nov 11, 2008

    Well done.

  • Melody Arcamo Lagrimas on Nov 11, 2008

    This is very well-written, nice work!

  • MMV Abad on Nov 12, 2008

    good stuff. lovely poem.

  • Assemba on Nov 13, 2008

    WOW! i loved it

  • eddiego65 on Nov 15, 2008

    Lovely, very lovely!

  • Reilley on Jan 6, 2009

    This was pretty cool, I liked it.

  • Brian Rasco Craig on Jan 6, 2009

    This is very well-written, you have done a good job with this.

  • Tennessee Thompson on Jan 7, 2009

    Very interesting. Good job.

  • nightcharmer on Mar 22, 2009

    That was quite an impressive work for your first piece of poem as a permanent writer. Keep writing!

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