Tthe intensity of a swimming race. Feel the power embrace you as you read this beautiful piece of art…

The tense of the stadium,
The swimmers scramble onto the blocks,
The crowd has been blocked by an invisible fence,
The world is quiet,
The inside of fans are screaming,
BANG! The water shatters,
The conversion between glass and chaos,
The cacophonous crowd are still as the swimmers are under,
The surface cracked once again ,
The first swimmer rose from the underworld,
And the irritant reality begins.

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  • shane on Sep 18, 2007

    good poem

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