My eyes are feeling heavy.

the swirlies again

my eyes are feeling heavy

but the words are in my head

i smile inside and giggle

for i love the feeling

of the smiling,

when you smile inside

that joyous, silly moment

that just giggles in the mind

i feel happy, i feel silly,

i feel giggly and my eyes

are heavy and i giggle

for i feel them droopy

trying not to submit

to the dreamy images

in my head

dreamy images

images with no visions

odd shapes and colors

swirly circles that are

thrown at me and

i smile and think why do

you insist on swirlies

my carissimi?

you certainly insist

on me acknowledging thee

so i will send a confirmation

but please explain to me

why do you do this to me?

i laugh because do you not

realize? swirlies make me dizzy

or do you already know

they make me dizzy and

why do you insist in

swirling them at me?

i already knew even

before i saw the swirlies

but if it makes you happy

if it brings you joy

let the swirlies be

i giggle for i am tired

i giggle for i do not understand

i giggle for those darn swirlies

are making me dizzy

night night, carissimi

silly swirlies go away

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Comments (15)
  • SuperMember on Sep 27, 2010

    great poem

  • melphens on Sep 27, 2010

    compiling words, really like this! ;)

  • JoeLopy on Sep 27, 2010

    nice poem.

  • Saurav Banerjee on Sep 27, 2010

    Good. liked it.

  • V rank on Sep 27, 2010

    good job!

  • Ethics0006 on Sep 27, 2010

    Good Post

  • ishinimrod on Sep 27, 2010

    Thank You for this.

  • Raj the Tora on Sep 27, 2010

    excellent :)

  • Ranjan Mathews on Sep 27, 2010

    Nice giggly girlie
    With wiggly swirlie
    Hey giggle giggle
    Make more dizzy jiggle.

  • Melinda J on Sep 27, 2010

    Thanks for sharing.

  • GodsGrace on Sep 27, 2010

    Nice Work

  • L R Humphries on Sep 27, 2010

    Beautiful as ever, your work sings. A great post.

    Take care

    Lew

  • Luna Morena on Sep 27, 2010

    nice poem

  • Sunjhini on Sep 27, 2010

    very sweet poem … lovely imagery.

  • Jswana on Sep 28, 2010

    I think I know about the swirly images….at any rate, this is the sweetest and nicest way to put it…poetically. Thanks so much!

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