DON’T BE FOOLED.

Her face is so beautiful, Her eyes on fire,
She will make You Hers, if its Her desire,
She will lure You, and take You and treat You fine,
Her table laid out for two to dine.

Then after She has teased You, and You have drunk the wine,
And feasted and enjoyed a meal so fine,
She leads You upstairs to Her four poster bed,
To entice you, Torment you and get in to your head.

Your heart will beat faster, its just her scheme,
Hypnotised by Her body, is this a dream.
You really hope that it’s not…
Your bodies locked, making love so hot.

You are feeling lucky, She is gorgeous and She chose You,
But sadly You are another in her queue.
Calming in silence, beside Her You lay,
And with Her hand held out…….She asks for her pay

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Comments (16)
  • Christine Ramsay on Jun 6, 2010

    Very well written. She was a real seductress. I particularly like the last line.

    Christine.

  • ShadowPsychos on Jun 6, 2010

    good write :)

  • jimbob1 on Jun 6, 2010

    Hey Jude…this is a great little poem slightly touching on the edge of sensual erotica…you have done a masterful job of tempting us to read this and it was well worth it…I really liked this one and voted to say so…thanks for an exciting start to a Sunday morning…

  • Lord Banks on Jun 6, 2010

    Great poem it flowed really well excellent, poor ole boy ended up with a lady of the night, that is why she probably was so skillful in her seduction. LB

  • babygirl3605 on Jun 6, 2010

    Very nice. You never no what you will get.

  • Ranjan Mathews on Jun 6, 2010

    After sweat-job she asks for pay
    Not his blood to convert prey
    Unlike blood-sucking Vampires
    Oldest profession never expires.

  • Anuradha Ramkumar on Jun 6, 2010

    Great write. She must really be a seductive girl.

  • Sourav on Jun 6, 2010

    Very well written poem.

  • pattiann on Jun 6, 2010

    I really like this one.

  • T D Hadnot on Jun 6, 2010

    Nice…

  • joyhyena29 on Jun 6, 2010

    great post^^

  • Judy Kaelin on Jun 6, 2010

    Excellent – I liked it!

  • Snooky on Jun 7, 2010

    Stupindous, magnificient, outstanding, you reached way down in your bag for this one, brilliant.

  • Vaibhav Diwaker on Jun 7, 2010

    That’s a nice one……..loved it………

  • chayanika on Jun 7, 2010

    nice write up

  • Kakraba Afful on Jul 3, 2010

    that’s exquisite storytelling, thank you.

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