The Tree

Bo Russo on Feb 23, 2009

Tags: Life, shelter, tree

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About a tree.

Tall strong deeply rooted tree

Shelter for the birds

And some shade for you and me

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Comments (12)

PR Mace on Feb 23, 2009
I liked this one.
Betty Carew on Feb 23, 2009
Simple but descriptive Bo
Holly J. Harrington on Feb 23, 2009
Cool work. Love Haiku.
Mercedes Selvira on Feb 23, 2009
Nice and simple. 7-5-7? Are you inventing a new poetry form–the inverse haiku? I admit, it would be easier to compose than the traditional 5-7-5 haiku. Kind of like my ‘haikuartet.’
Alina Beck on Feb 23, 2009
Very cute!
Karen Gross on Feb 23, 2009
Very sweet.
Vikram Chhabra on Feb 23, 2009
Short, sweet and simple!!
Michele Cameron Drew on Feb 23, 2009
Nice… I was thinking pretty much the same thing as Mercedes while I was reading. An inverse haiku.
Lee Altman on Feb 23, 2009
cool
rutherfranc on Feb 23, 2009
cool haiku BO!
monica55 on Feb 24, 2009
Short, but spicy. Cute poem
Monica
papaleng on Feb 24, 2009
like this one Bo. SU

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