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Welcome to Triond Community Club

No idea when this club was set up

Over here, you can meet many friends

They may be boys, girls, women or men

Members coming from all walks of life

We make friends gradually as time goes by

Regardless of race, language, religion or gender

The main objective is to write and submit articles

Some members are old, but they are young at heart

While some are young but they are really very smart

How do members really look like, we don’t really know

As we don’t see them, only through the awesome photo

There are some using cartoon characters to represent

And there are people using just logo, hey, I am one of them

Not revealing ourselves is not because we are very ugly

Neither the reasons of being too handsome, pretty or sexy

Come on, we have our own reasons for hiding our identities

Owe nobody any explanation, so I never feel bad or guilty

Though we can’t hear the members’ voices, but we are noisy

The noise come from the writings, praising and complaining

Giving and receiving moral support are important in Triond

Without these good gestures, we don’t have faith to carry on

You scratch my back, I do the same, though its not a must

I scratch yours with all my might, with finger nails or wire brush

When you are in joy, share with us, we will be happy for you

But you can also get some flying hugs here when you feel blue

May the community club be alive, too quiet is not so healthy

Silence is not always golden, make some noises please

Many come and go for better pastures which are greener

While some go and come again as their visa not yet expire

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http://authspot.com/poetry/the-lazy-susan/

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  • sgkeat on Aug 16, 2011

    Don’t forget this (bo-chup) member…

  • Videomark on Aug 16, 2011

    Always interesting people at the club.

  • UncleSammy on Aug 16, 2011

    Thanks – good one

  • Uma Shankari on Aug 16, 2011

    How do I join?

    Liked your poem.

  • Christine Ramsay on Aug 16, 2011

    I love the idea. and you have made a very good poem out of it, Star. Well done.

  • Starpisces on Aug 16, 2011

    Thanks friends for your comments.
    Strange, this post is still pending but I receive some comments.
    I think the reason is because I amended the title, with a “The” in front, which caused the problem? Maybe, but I think it should be okay later, anyway, I don’t worry that much as before as my business already dropped here, lol.

  • mtrguanlao on Aug 16, 2011

    Nice to be back again in Triond and of course,nice to see your great works again Star,you made me smile again! :)

  • No Share on Aug 16, 2011

    well like college students, Triond has become the backdrop of our lives. We are like James Bond, shroud in secrecy.LOL

  • Francois Hagnere on Aug 16, 2011

    I totally agree with everything you say, my dear friend. And you say it in a magnificent way. I love this poem, it is so true and heart felt.
    Welcome all to the club, whoever you are, here is the place to find friendship. I confirm Star is an excellent Ambassador!

  • Val Mills on Aug 16, 2011

    Wonderful poem – love it! I’m one of the old but young at heart :-)

  • CA Johnson on Aug 16, 2011

    Thisi s a great poem. I have made some great friends here and you are definitely one of them. Thanks for sharing.

  • The Bling on Aug 16, 2011

    This is an awesome community. Can’t find anything like it anywhere else. Fun tribute.

  • Lady Sunshine on Aug 16, 2011

    This piece made me smile! Keep giving us that ray of sunshine, Star. Too many Triond members are dreary and self-important, threatening to leave, etc, etc. You are a bright spot on Triond.

  • LCM Linda on Aug 16, 2011

    Star, I come here to make some noises and send you some flying hugs. Love the idea of the community club very much. Let’s enjoy our moment here.

  • Brewed Coffee on Aug 17, 2011

    Right, silence is not always golden….sometimes, you got to learn to party!

    Kumusta, kaibigan? Am sure you know what that means Star :-)

  • papaleng on Aug 17, 2011

    Very nice poem. I belong to the Oldies but goodies..LOL

  • Starpisces on Aug 17, 2011

    thanks friends for your kind comments! You are awesome!

    @ Brewed – miss your writings, luckily we still keep in touch.
    Huh! I only know a bit here and there… Kumusta, Kaibigan? You mean “How are you, friend?”.

    Anyone can correct me, if I’m wrong, salamat! lol..

  • Brenda Nelson on Aug 17, 2011

    great community but the bathrooms are out of toilet paper again.

  • Mark Gordon Brown on Aug 17, 2011

    good times.. good times..

  • reiny on Aug 20, 2011

    wow.. i just read a great poem :)

  • Sharif Ishnin on Aug 21, 2011

    Nice share! Keep going! This comment is a tribute to an old friend. How do I join this club?:)

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Aug 22, 2011

    Funny and sweet. Glad to have met you here.

  • Michal Dorcak on Aug 26, 2011

    And some are young, but feel like they were 100 or maybe it’s just that damn heat and thick air of the past days :)

  • Phoenix Montoya on Aug 26, 2011

    I love the give and take thing but please not with the wire brush… oh no lol

  • KittyK on Aug 27, 2011

    Oh, your poem is just perfect. Our “club” is indeed growing and we all learn from one another – near and far, together we are here!

  • wonder on Sep 4, 2011

    Hi friend! What can I say?
    We may come and go
    But love,natural,resides there at the bottom of our heart
    right below.
    A tribute to you.

  • FX777222999 on Sep 8, 2011

    Very nice and interesting thoughts you’ve shared.

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