About our Triond family. Sorry, I know I haven’t included everyone here, but my poem was getting too long. I will get back to everyone later.

Where on earth is goodselfme?

Would someone ask Chan Lee Peng?

PR Mace has passed the throng

The Triond folks can do no wrong

Joanna calls from tree to tree

Steven West has gone to sea

RJ Grant says come on home

The Triond folks can do no wrong

Lindalulu boils the pot

Christine says its way too hot

Darlene cracks the chicken bones

The Triond folks can do no wrong

A Fool says that ain’t no joke

Debra Man picks all the poke

Nobert’s good as day is long

The Triond folks can do no wrong

Joystick swims in the creek

Glynis says it’s much too deep

Anna Ski wears a sarong

The Triond folks can do no wrong

Judy scales the picket fence

Ryan J is backward bent

MJ Patrick throws a stone

The Triond folks can do no wrong

Leanne flies high as the sky

Karan watches her go by

Gabbic’s talking on the phone

The Triond folks can do no wrong

B Nelson says hi to Poo

C Jordan knows just what to do

Michele would love to see King Kong

The Triond folks can do no wrong

Eddiego must like to fish

Mys Lyke says it’s not her dish

James has never cared to roam

The Triond folks can do no wrong

Lanne swims in the pool

Eunice says its way too cool

Debbie runs to heck and gone

The Triond folks can do no wrong

Melody is a lively guide

Reilley runs a country mile

Sue must ring the supper gong

The Triond folks can do no wrong

Writer writes then grins and smiles

Liane likes the latest styles

Joanna Maharris sings a song

The Triond folks can do no wrong

Brian call the chimney black

Jimmy says you take it back

M A McDonald cracked his dome

The Triond folks can do no wrong

NA Staffer draws them in

Big Chris is drinking all the gin

Bonzi Rose sits on a throne

The Triond folks can do no wrong

Valli goes a little wild

Neelam ate up all the pie

B C says where’s my doggie gone

The Triond folks can do no wrong

Moses has the bluest eyes

Rookie always wears a smile

Louie can’t be gone too long

The Triond folks can do no wrong

Verniel plants flowers in the field

Quiet Voice with her hoe can till

Mark Gordon must pick up all the stones

The Triond folks can do no wrong

Unofre writes with great appeal

R J Evans stamps the seal

C A Johnson crowns his dome

The Triond folks can do no wrong

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Comments (43)
  • Debra. on Nov 24, 2008

    A funny and wonderful poem,Ruby. Excellent read. Another great laugh.

  • Melody SJAL on Nov 24, 2008

    Oh, Ruby, I enjoyed it a lot. This is a winer. Thanks for mentioning me. God bless.

  • Melody SJAL on Nov 24, 2008

    I mean, a winner!

  • Unofre Pili on Nov 24, 2008

    Very pleasing article maam. Creative and well-crafted. Thanks for the inclusion.

  • Karen Gross on Nov 24, 2008

    Great poem. You must know a lot of Triond writers!

  • joystick7 on Nov 24, 2008

    lOVELY..
    aMAZING.
    sUPERB…
    cLASSY…

    I loved this one…

  • Rana Sinha on Nov 24, 2008

    A delightful read and a great laugh.

  • James DeVere on Nov 24, 2008

    you are so cheeky………..xxjj:)

  • Enzo Silvestri on Nov 24, 2008

    hmm, one could say a charming acrostic of names.

  • Glynis Smy on Nov 24, 2008

    Ha Ha such fun! I love the way the Triond Community is coming together lately, we will get our forum one day I hope ;)

  • Reilley on Nov 24, 2008

    I am just egotistical enough to be enormously pleased that I was included. ;-)

  • sue mcverry on Nov 24, 2008

    Clever idea.

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 24, 2008

    A great idea. Thank you for including me. Very funny.

    Christine

  • a fool on Nov 24, 2008

    Nicely done, Ruby.

  • Eden Emersen on Nov 24, 2008

    You have some pretty accurate characterizations captured in perfect rhythm :)

  • Mark Gordon Brown on Nov 24, 2008

    You should see my lovely stones!!!
    We havent even had snow yet, but alas, they are frozen to the ground so I will have to await spring before I can move anymore.

  • Brenda Nelson on Nov 24, 2008

    Lots of poo when you have 6 cats, 14 sheep, 1 donkey, 2 mini horses, llama, a donkey, birds… blah blah blah
    course more poo = nice lawn!

  • Christy Tuller on Nov 24, 2008

    So Creative and fun! I love it! Great work Ruby Hawk, as always!

  • goodselfme on Nov 24, 2008

    here I am! What a spirited and lively write! Enjoyed it a lot!

  • R J Grant on Nov 24, 2008

    You have too many friends! :)

    Really a great rhyme Ruby.

    Grant

  • NA Staffieri on Nov 24, 2008

    Thanks for including me. This was a lot of fun to read.
    Thanks, Ruby.

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 24, 2008

    Thanks everyone for your comments. It was fun to write. We need to lighten up now and then and have a good chuckle.I will include others soon. You are all the best.

    B Nelson, I was referring to our fellow writer poo,and not to sheep poo. sorry for the misunderstanding.

  • lindalulu on Nov 24, 2008

    So fun Ruby, and thanks for mentioning me! I do think we are all getting closer and I hope one day we do get a forum.

  • valli on Nov 24, 2008

    A funny and excellent poem! Thanks for mentioning me.

  • Judy Sheldon on Nov 24, 2008

    Ruby, that was a great read. Thanks for including me. You can’t have too many friends!

  • Alicia Wind on Nov 24, 2008

    Wow—u done it so well…

    Bravo, bravo, bravo—applaud you for that!

  • Eunice Tan on Nov 25, 2008

    Waaa.. it’s a very creative work. I’m proud to be your friend. Thanks!

  • Joie Schmidt on Nov 25, 2008

    I ABSOLUTELY love this – you are such a shining angel full of altruistic beauty!

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • C Jordan on Nov 25, 2008

    “C Jordan knows just what to do”
    say “Hey Ruby,well done to you”

  • Brenda Nelson on Nov 25, 2008

    whoops – bad me, I had not encountered Triond memeber “poo” but having done some reasearch I see this person is very active here on Authspot – shame on me.!

  • Michele Cameron Drew on Nov 25, 2008

    Thanks so much, Ruby for including me! I am feeling so at home here on Triond as of late. Although I don’t remember recently wanting to see King Kong, it’s a great write! Thanks for the fun :)

    -M

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 25, 2008

    Hello everyone, It’s been great fun reading all your comments. I am so glad to have you all for friends. I appreciate you everyone. You all have my best wishes, Ruby

  • PR Mace on Nov 25, 2008

    Hi Ruby,
    I have worked the last two days 12 hours day shifts and have not had a chance to check my account. I only have time to check out one tonight before I go to bed and your title called out to me. I had to see what it was all about. Wonderful, funny read. Thanks for letting me be a part of it. I am honored. You are the best. Take special care, my friend, Pam or as I am known the the poem PR Mace.

  • R.B. Parsley on Nov 25, 2008

    Ruby,
    I loved reading this! It was definitely a joy to read. It lifted my spirits when they needed a lift. Fantastic!

    Randy

  • hfj on Nov 26, 2008

    Unbelievable Ruby, great work.

  • CA Johnson on Nov 26, 2008

    What a great poem! I loved it! :)

  • gabbic1219 on Nov 27, 2008

    I am on the phone alot…Lol
    my name suits me well.this was really nice:)
    full of cheer!

  • A M McDonald on Nov 28, 2008

    very original! Ouch, I cracked my dome??!!!

    I loved it!!!

    A.M. McDonald

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Nov 29, 2008

    It’s been fun reading your articles! Take care!

  • Johnny Yuma on Nov 30, 2008

    Ruby, this is nice. I know that I enjoy being here on Triond. To bad I didn\’t find it sooner. Everyone here seems to be real friendly–that I like in a site.
    Damon/johnny yuma

  • Gail Nobles on Dec 1, 2008

    I love it! It should be on Triond’s front page or blog.

  • xoxo on Dec 4, 2008

    Cute! A fun read!

  • BC Doan on Dec 4, 2008

    This is fun to read! Interesting and flow so nice together..Thanks Ruby!

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