Soul mates, lovers and friends, deeply in love, with the knowledge that the true one comes along only once in a lifetime.

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I suddenly feel a tempestuous heat

 fluctuating all around here.

The reason is

 that I feel you near.

My heart speeds up

with the thrill

of overwhelming will.

Your essence has spilled

into my soul,

flowing through to the receptive basins.

A fountain of messages

are sent to the pleasure centers.

The rushing of heat

throughout my members,

are like tantalizing embers

stoked by your very own kiss.

I do not want to miss

the tenderness of your lips

that sends the heat to my hips.

An ocean of strength

pushes against a dam,

letting freedom abound

 with the most intimate spot

 that you have found.

My breath escapes

between clinched teeth,

as I become one

with your guided sheath.

Take me to your oblivion

and join the stars

in the sky.

We become drunk on passionate love,

and not able to get enough.

Our souls co-exist

in a lover’s mist,

with an ongoing climactic rush.

My face reveals a heavy pink flush.

You take my breath away

and I am left unable to speak,

from the shock of my core’s mainstay.

My lover you are,

for whom I would go far.

The mender of my senses,

teaches me to feel

like rows and rows of fences.

You are my friend, as well my lover.

There will never be another.

My heart belongs to

the only true one,

and that my love

was meant to be you.

 

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  • T. S. Lewis on Jan 14, 2010

    From the start to the finish you wrote this without a blemish

  • Aldrin A Wilding West on Jan 14, 2010

    A roller-coaster ride of love and passion. The love is there for all to see. The passion and climax of your words enough for the reader to feel the moment almost as deeply as you did.

    A passionate write.

    (You did ask me to be honest, so don’t forget to spell check my friend – otherwise you’re going to have to appreciate this comment through ‘clinched’ teeth :)

  • Midie on Jan 17, 2010

    You are always in hot mood, nice for you.

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