Falling in love.

You blow my cover
And break my guard down
Finally I’m inlove again

With those fingers and palms
Crawling through my skin
Your eyes that look so deep
Drives me insane

You spoil it
We either want to spoil it
Some kind of remedy

You give me the unusual
More than what I hope for
More than talks of casual

Could be a trouble
Offend the crowd
Shout it out loud

You shoot me in the head
Now I’m begging for mercy
Taking all I’ve got
It’s all around me
You’re all that I see

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Comments (10)
  • I Have Had Enough on Aug 16, 2009

    Good work, do you write in your own language first and then translate it?

  • BenJammin14 on Aug 16, 2009

    wow i liked this one!

  • Tanya Wallace on Aug 16, 2009

    Wonderful poem about how it feels to fall in love!

  • giftarist on Aug 16, 2009

    Nice piece! I like the thought

  • The Soul Explorer on Aug 17, 2009

    In love… :)

  • TjRockin on Aug 17, 2009

    :) great job!!!!!

  • alc on Aug 17, 2009

    A very strong piece!!!!! Great job!!!

  • alc on Aug 17, 2009

    A very strong piece!!! Great job!!!

  • martie on Aug 17, 2009

    This is a wonderful poem.

  • Leonardo da Vinci E. on Aug 20, 2009

    Thats what love does to you.

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