Here is a poem I wrote about a guy I once thought I loved.

I thought you’d be mine this Valentine’s Day,

But instead I told you to go away.

I wanted you so bad,

Now all you do is make me sad.

I thought us being together was fate,

When all I feel for you now is hate.

I thought you were the one for me,

I now know your love didn’t come free.

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  • aheed411 on Feb 13, 2012

    I liked the poem

  • mdrkarim7 on Feb 13, 2012

    Nicely portrayed..

  • CA Johnson on Feb 13, 2012

    This is really great. I am sorry that you were with a guy that treated you badly, but now you are free of him. Thanks for sharing.

  • Tulan on Feb 14, 2012

    Sometimes the one we thing is “the one” isn’t . I’m sure he will come along.

  • Eliza26 on Feb 16, 2012

    Nice poem!

  • rgreenfield on Feb 16, 2012

    very intriguing… ;)

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