A poem.

How would one get rid of the unwanted guest?

You would surely have to try your best.

Subtle hints here are there,

Little patience left to spare.

Bad food and conversation,

Vain efforts driving you to exhaustion.

Fake laughs and plastered smiles,

Weak excuses of being busy with your files.

Those loud snores and bad bathroom conventions,

Eating up your serenity, without any considerations.

Just when you think you can’t handle the situation,

You are struck by the solution.

Packing up your essentials,

You go out on vacation!

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Comments (8)
  • Rakesh on Oct 28, 2009

    nice one…..improving with every post dear…keep rocking

  • crucisis on Oct 28, 2009

    hehe. Nice. i wonder what the inspirations been. :P

  • ashish on Nov 7, 2009

    Nice……..

  • V rank on Nov 17, 2009

    you read this in front of your unwanted and you’ll get rid of him/her.. hehehe

  • Puja on Nov 17, 2009

    hehehe…..yaa…ill try doing that!

  • maybii on Nov 28, 2009

    Just had one the other day. tried everything but going on vacation. In the end i tried making the most out of it maybe time will go quickly. It didnt.
    Nice one keep up the good work

  • Puja on Nov 29, 2009

    Thanks a lot!!
    I wrote this when i had a lot of unwanted guests in my house! I finally gave up trying to adjust and hung out at my friends place. :) My idea of a vacation! hehhe

  • divya983 on Dec 18, 2009

    Interesting and impressive

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