The Up-look

giftarist on Jan 17, 2010

Tags: beginning, bright, fresh start, future, Hope, Life, New, Optimistic, sunrise, Thoughts

Another day will come.

There were plenty of times

When all around me

Were in darkness,

And troublesome,

No one to talk to,

No shoulder to lean on,

Nobody cared to show,

Any compassion whatsoever,

I almost lost my last breath,

When I tried to up-look,

There I saw a great

Light of hope,

A new day is coming,

To have a fresh start,

I’ve learned a lesson from this,

That if all seemed so dark around you,

Try the up-look and then,

Start it all over again from the beginning,

Then you’ll work it out again.

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lillyrose on Jan 17, 2010
great full of emotion and it describes what many feel!
qasimdharamsy on Jan 17, 2010
Really nice….
alc on Jan 17, 2010
Thanks for the great share! Enjoyed the read!
Lady Sunshine on Jan 17, 2010
A poem of hope. Nicely done, gift.
Christine Ramsay on Jan 17, 2010
You give very good advice in this poem. A beautiful and emotional piece.

Christine
johnnydod on Jan 17, 2010
there’s always hope
Sourav on Jan 17, 2010
Nice hopeful poem
Judy Sheldon on Jan 17, 2010
You are so right. Your poem is delightful and your picture stunning. Thanks for the share.
Shirley Shuler on Jan 17, 2010
A wonderful poem, gift. There is always hope!
LOVELYHONEY on Jan 17, 2010
You’re up look
Makes me look up
Where in the white sky
Full of snowy clouds
Do you hide?
I too shall want to
Have a lovely ride
On the clouds you say
I should look upto
Perhaps
My youthful friend
Come up to look up
Suddenly at you too.
Darla Cooke on Jan 17, 2010
Very inspiring!
CA Johnson on Jan 17, 2010
This is very good. I have felt this way plenty of times.
Ruby Hawk on Jan 17, 2010
right you are, always a new day dawning.
PR Mace on Jan 17, 2010
Tomorrow is always another day. Lovely work.
Inna Tysoe on Jan 17, 2010
Good one.

Inna
Buma on Jan 18, 2010
Gives off a very sentimental feeling.
papaleng on Jan 18, 2010
Hanep Kabayan, very intelligent write. You did find God’s wisdom, Just look up for He is our hope.
magicdarts on Jan 18, 2010
a refreshing burst of invigoration for the soul – thanks!
drelayaraja on Jan 18, 2010
Great and heavy wordings.. Nice share
albert1jemi on Jan 18, 2010
great poem
monica55 on Jan 18, 2010
A truly inspiring piece. Thanks for the read.
Monica.
AlmaG on Jan 18, 2010
Hopeful and inspiring. Well done!

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